End of love is like any other season.
Suddenly overnight, with a hint of treason.
There was no fight, or fanfare.
Only an acrid smell of burnt hair.
A solitary heart raged louder than a storm.
What was begotten got buried in earth like a worm.
Sooner or later this feeling too will end,
Like all things that eventually transcend.
*The Thursday Poets Rally*
The Amrita Connection 
Hey – I love your poem and I thought that love was like you describe it…unfortunately that hasn’t been the reality for me. In fact, it’s been 1.2 years since the break up and I am still madly in love..crazy? Yes..
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yeah, love can be crazy and it takes time to heal and move on. thanks for stopping by!
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a gem ..will treasure..
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enjoyed reading…..soon u will b in love again 😉
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thank you 🙂
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Nicely done. Like the last line.
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Very Nice Poetry with an amazing Imagination
Great Work of Creativity !! Highly Expressive !!
It was indeed enjoyable after reading this one !!
Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/
some of my Haiku Collections
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/creative-challenges/the-haiku-challenge/
and also, on my very recent Work as well
!!! Happy Rally !!!
Cheers !!
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awesome job.
have fun in the rally.
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Sometimes the feeling never ends. You are changed for life.
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love is like an noxious thing. either it mesmerizes you with happiness or fills your heart with bitterness. i loved your poem a lot. 🙂
from,
life
my try at poet’s rally
http://blindfold-princess.blogspot.com/2011/08/sorrows-i-could-name-it.html?spref=bl
and my recent work
http://blindfold-princess.blogspot.com/2011/08/awaiting.html?spref=bl
something i guess you will be able to connect with. 🙂
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So true. Been there.
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/09/01/ive-got-you/
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